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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England

0 posted 2009-09-24 08:57 AM



She transfixes my weary eyes,
Her body; the tapestry of divine weavers,
Every perfection etched in seraphic white and gold

Sacred, ethereal, quintessential
Love within her breast's rise and fall,
Each breath; a sigh of what passed,
Even the emerald dream cannot deny the
Passions of a mutual subconscious,
So, cradled to me, I join her reverie.


'Wailing voices on the wind, urging me to turn. Distant tortured screams. Cold blue fires burn'.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-09-24 09:11 AM


Ah, yes! Ain't love grand! A stirring poem of love and adoration.

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2009-09-24 11:32 AM


I want to be her!

Lovely.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2009-09-24 01:51 PM


Oh my ... this is just lovely Suncleaver. Wonderful and dreamy visuals ... I love acrostics. Very nicely written.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-09-24 06:27 PM


Very nice acrostic, dear Luke.

Sweet reverie beckoning.

Love,
M

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