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Open Poetry #45

She Sleeps (Acrostic)

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-09-24 08:57 AM

She transfixes my weary eyes,
Her body; the tapestry of divine weavers,
Every perfection etched in seraphic white and gold

Sacred, ethereal, quintessential
Love within her breast's rise and fall,
Each breath; a sigh of what passed,
Even the emerald dream cannot deny the
Passions of a mutual subconscious,
So, cradled to me, I join her reverie.

'Wailing voices on the wind, urging me to turn. Distant tortured screams. Cold blue fires burn'.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-09-24 09:11 AM

Ah, yes! Ain't love grand! A stirring poem of love and adoration.

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2009-09-24 11:32 AM

I want to be her!

Lovely.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2009-09-24 01:51 PM

Oh my ... this is just lovely Suncleaver. Wonderful and dreamy visuals ... I love acrostics. Very nicely written.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-09-24 06:27 PM

Very nice acrostic, dear Luke.

Sweet reverie beckoning.

Love,
M

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