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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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weaving our limbs with the shadows of trees pressing the smooth of our rough places to the soft of our hard sided wanting we were just fallow ground with love scattered and then we heard the rain come sounds like sprinkling on glass when it echoes the earth never minds getting dirty it seems and we did laugh at our new shoes later when we lost them in the barefoot mud and got our proper finery somewhat ruined but the unison of the sensations made it lovely like how sighs feel when they are only dreamed and one wakes with the taste of them tomorrow ______________ daark (do of wax) |
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anniepimm54 Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 110 |
I like this and the picture it creates in the mind, is one that the reader can imagine for themselves excellent poem..  Annie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms annie..thanks so much ms |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
like how sighs feel when they are only dreamed and one wakes with the taste of them tomorrow _______ I like this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms browneyes |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Hallo , I am improving I think I loved the poem and wonder I understood. Love Esha |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
me esha..thanks lady friend... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes I whisper when I read your poems as if to read them out loud would scare away the words. I like this lots. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are able to grow flowers in the desert and you transform mud into crystal clear water with your poetic magical wand. Wouldn't want to miss any of your words, ever ... Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, I do enjoy your whispers, thanks babe ___________ ms mar, thank you for your woman eyes on my humble pen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the unison of the sensations made it lovely like how sighs feel when they are only dreamed and one wakes with the taste of them tomorrow Such a soft and wonderful ending... Your words are the perfect cigarette for a non-smoker. *G* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..cigars take longer...wink..thanks lady!! |
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