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zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12
Posts 111
Ottawa Ontario

0 posted 2009-09-22 04:23 AM


Sticks and dots
amid wavering silence;
echoing the lines
on my face.
Kept in measure,
a quarter-four;
or whatever
my heart dreams
it is.

A tapestry
woven in time,
gently held
as a bird in hand.
So delicate rolling,
never shaking,
Except with
magic wand
to bring
a wistful smile.

Blended, mixed
so softly now.
The gentle rest,
a butterfly;
Downy soft,
yet strength of steel
in the music of my heart

I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me.

© Copyright 2009 David I Graf - All Rights Reserved
anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

1 posted 2009-09-22 09:34 AM


Quite a deep poem but excellently written
Annie

GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

2 posted 2009-09-24 07:03 PM


Very Nice. Let's run this one up to the top of the page for some more comments.
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
3 posted 2009-09-28 12:34 PM



your words always capture me..very nice  


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