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Thoughtful energy |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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So blows this life into the mind where lives a thoughtful energy and it joins and dissipates the force that once was paramount. And in this mix creation’s orb shrinks and shrivels, disappears and becomes a servant to dis-ease clothed in shredded leftovers of its former glory. To search and find and reinstate what once made life worthwhile like a chore unlisted on the board of human existence. Lonely is the voice in time that calls with silent needfulness for thought to rise and fight, fight, fight, the dictates of a mortal life. Creation’s orb is there somewhere tattered, torn, not as before, so blows this life into the mind again, again, till death the end! Helen / 22 September 2009 |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had to real the wisdom in this twice. I loved this stanza. Beautifully done. Lonely is the voice in time that calls with silent needfulness for thought to rise and fight, fight, fight, the dictates of a mortal life |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Honey, I always appreciate the "Thoughtful energy" that you put into each of your poetic pearls of wisdom.  Love you bunches, Honey! Linda   |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Death will be a new beginning, in my belief. Transition ... Our Path down here isn't easy, but life as I see it is a gift and it is always worthwile to be lived. I understand your melancholy, because I have those moments too and you render them so well with this poem. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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