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Open Poetry #45

180 Proof is Powerful Stuff.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-09-21 05:44 PM

I trickled down your lips like a thick red wine
accidentally spilled, in the midst of a hearty laugh
falling rapidly to the floor, leaving stains
but pleased to have touched you in the first place.

I went to your head and made you foolish
poor decisions piled over you like drifts of snow
plastic-bottle vodka often does that to young women.
You woke up tasting vomit and regretting me already

I showed in your doorway, amber like finely aged whiskey
You couldn't help but deny me then,
saying you weren't a fan of the hard stuff anymore.
I asked you why you'd changed your mind,
and told you that I was in fact cheap beer

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-09-21 06:51 PM

I showed in your doorway, amber like finely aged whiskey
You couldn't help but deny me then,
saying you weren't a fan of the hard stuff anymore.
I asked you why you'd changed your mind,
and told you that I was in fact cheap beer
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I love this poem..it's so you

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-09-21 10:09 PM

thanks, browneyes.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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