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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-09-21 02:20 AM




Crushed velvet thoughts,
soothing the days longing,
as memories record plays,
the river flows, pondering,

My bathed body cruified,
upon the pillow puffy bed,
eyes of glass gaze upon ceiling,
vanilla candles scented,

Sweet escapes fill my dreams,
delicious as ripe berries and creams,
kiss my soul away to neverland,
never wake me while I sleep,

Your treasure awaits here in my heart,
deeply buried, you have the map,
follow the course,
to where you will be,
forever in my arms.


© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2009-09-21 04:02 AM


ARH...A great romantic write. Really enjoyed the flow of your words...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-09-21 05:19 AM


Thank you Paul.....
for your lovely comments...

~ARH

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-09-27 03:40 PM


Your specialty, Romanticism.


ARCTIC WIND

brneyedgrly
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nowhere and everywhere
4 posted 2009-09-28 12:19 PM



I agree with mr. wind

your specialty

      


LindsayP
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5 posted 2009-09-28 01:37 AM



A lovely post my dear, a real joy to read.

Take care, love.

Lindsay

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