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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were under the trees that were earrings at the neck line of some whispering dawn voices hanging on each others words then swallowing them silently inside perhaps the swelling of emotions was noticeable more on myself then on your skin but we worshiped the willing mirrors anyway like a parade of only two without watchers knowing god was taking his time looking away and was shaking his head at our brazen you suggested he made us this way for reasons I could only imagine the agenda thereafter so I described it to you in vivid details and you made those sounds in your soul again then laughed sometimes that I had caught you but wanted more of my borderline insatiability as if an addiction was what we both needed _______________ daark (do of sand) scribblenote: the lee side of shells is the side away from the wind where the color stays true and is not covered by sand.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are not only a dessert that melts in sweetness on the tongue, you personify all that a soul needs to absorb of poetic nourishment. The whole of it is stunning.  Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oui Mr Daark... an addiction indeed! Lovely writing Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks special lady friend _________ ms r&b, thanks pretty lady for the touch |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like your scribble note, and what you said about true colors. and everything that made it so... Makes for a beautiful poem ya know... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you bluezy... |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
I loved this part! I reminds me of that other side that each of us has of the longing to sometimes step over that invisible boundary that we set for ourselves. Thank you as always for sharing!!!! so I described it to you in vivid details and you made those sounds in your soul again then laughed sometimes that I had caught you but wanted more of my borderline insatiability as if an addiction was what we both needed Pretty1 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms pretty1, thank you babe for the touch |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"borderline insatiability" will cure all ails! It works for me!   EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms EA, thanks lady!! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Is addiction a need or a craving? Either hits me with this one. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..it is a craving at first and then an addiction and then a craving again for a few moments..thanks babe |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
your scribblenote is as beautiful as your poem |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes, thank you for touching the lee side ms |
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