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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2009-09-19 01:34 AM


Hot, passionate, and ardently
the breath of life flows happily
but ‘tis an unseen energy
that flows both here and there
and imbues her moments now
with the sublime and the beautiful
and also the ridiculous.

And the pictures glue themselves
with no concern or care
for the order of progression
perceived as being normal.

So that collage of here and there
not straight but tilted in the mind
hangs on the wall where harmony
should be the focal point.

Sometimes she walks around
and pretends at being blind
while searching in her state of mind
for long lost harmony.

She searches like a woman does
with senses well attuned and armed
to crash through veils and barriers
like tornadoes, hurricanes, and such
wreck havoc with the known.

She will, she will, glue harmony
between the here and there
one day, one day, when cold winds blow
and passion freezes up!

Helen / 19 September 2009


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martiniat8
Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
1 posted 2009-09-19 01:57 AM


Wow tgis is an insightful look into a woman's psyche. Loved the read, learned a lot.
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2009-09-19 02:06 AM


Thanks, Martiniat8.  I think we need to remember that not all women or, indeed, men are the same.  Perhaps it's meant so we will take the time and the trouble to get to know each other.  Not sure really.

Welcome to Pip.  

Helen

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-09-20 01:15 AM


She will, she will, glue harmony
between the here and there
one day, one day, when cold winds blow
and passion freezes up!..............................."

This write is insightful, dearest sweet batch of honey.


ARCTIC WIND

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2009-09-20 05:51 AM


Hello, Arctic!  Thanks so much for reading.  I've replaced the word "balance" with "harmony" in my internal dictionary.  Balance sometimes is hard to achieve but to be in harmony with the ups and the downs is perhaps better - at least for me - when I achieve it.

Love
Helen

brneyedgrly
Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
5 posted 2009-09-20 02:41 PM



liked this very much

        


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