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Open Poetry #45

Diaspora (the leaving)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-09-20 12:37 PM

do they know

what she sees

beyond cradle's caress

of trinkets and
tarnish running
wide on the gypsy

in the ground
of her dwelling

postpartum of flower

the sober
reminder

(on the sweep
of the harvest)

to both frame
and revival

to where
do they go

in the cadence
of color

the avalanche
brewing

on this first night
to nowhere

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-22-2009 11:20 AM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-09-20 12:51 PM

oh I love this! I love your style of writing... beautiful and then some..

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2009-09-20 03:32 PM

ms inki...you always open drapes and leaves windows to breathe..

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-09-20 04:04 PM

Very melancholic, your compassion runs deep here.
Powerful write.
Love,
Margherita

larzana
Member

since 2009-09-17

Posts 55

4 posted 2009-09-20 05:17 PM

Ooooh, nice.
"This first night to nowhere" opens my mind to endless possibilities or impossibilities...

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