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Le Pompiers... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Le Pompiers blaze their way along Rue Monge Sirens scream to the beat of Parr-don, Parr-don, Parr-don They wait for no one And no one waits for them They think they own Paris They probably do Parr-don, Parr-don, Parr-don Rue Monge never tires of their screaming The screaming never tires of Le Pompiers Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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larzana Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 55 |
I really liked it. Especially the flow of the pardon lines.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine impressionistic 'slice of life' in Paris 'write' ! serious applause!! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You continue to bring me smiles as if they are presents wrapped by your poetry. Wait! They are. Love you lots, A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Your poetry is always a pleasure to read. Roniece, you have a wonderful gift.  ARCTIC WIND |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Roniece, this is splendid,tourists are always impressionned by firemen, I really like the siren screaming pardon, this is a so imaginative poem, I will keep it... have a nice day yann |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) This is sooooooooo cute, my friend, I just love how you play around with the sounds of Paris traffic and then re-evaluate the human experience through it! For all we know, they really DO own Paris..........maybe hold Parliament seats too........and no matter what they do, behind their thick silicon composure......they'll honk "I beg your Parrr-Don?"   This is a most amusing slice of French bread, my friend, thanks sooooooooo much!  XOXO, Lisping Hibiscus "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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