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Hockey4life
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since 2009-09-17
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0 posted 2009-09-17 03:28 PM


The Girl of My Dreams


You’re the prettiest girl in my life,
Now you understand my strife.
I’d run a mile,
To see your smile,
The way your skin gleams,
Makes you the girl of my dreams.

You’re eyes,
Are as blue as the skies.
They make me think,
To go on the brink,
Of happiness.
Which can only be,
That you’re with me.
When I look at you, my heart steams,
Which can only mean you’re the girl of my dreams.

When I first saw you I realized something,
That when we’re together you’re the only thing.
That matters in this world,
Which feels like its being twirled,
On Cupid’s arrow,
Your as delicate as a sparrow.
Flying in the wind,
Not being with you makes me feel like I’ve sinned.
Every time I see you my heart screams,
I think this means you’re the girl of my dreams.

There is only one problem,
I’ll always be lonesome.
The reason for this,
I’ll never feel you’re kiss.
Because there is only one place I see you,
And this place, is my dreams.  



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-09-17 03:43 PM


Any one who can write as sweetly and adoringly as this, deserves to have this dream become their reality.

Hi, Hockey! Welcome aboard the Pip Ship Lollipip as I affectionately refer to our home of kindred spirits!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-09-17 07:52 PM


Welcome to PIP,

Keep on dreaming, she will appear one day,
just out of the blue...maybe these pages of blue? you never know?

I know a hockey player, he taught me how to ice skate....

Enjoyed you sharing your heart with us~
stick around and write some more~

Hope you feel at home here~

~ARH

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2009-09-17 10:27 PM


Nice first poem. I'm from the great state of hockey, so I'm feelin' ya there, playa.


Welcome to pooptalk.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-09-18 01:50 PM


Welcome to Pip! Lovely first entry. Go on dreaming, she will manifest, don't doubt it.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2009-09-18 10:01 PM


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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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