Open Poetry #45 |
The Girl of My Dreams |
Hockey4life New Member
since 2009-09-17
Posts 2 |
The Girl of My Dreams You’re the prettiest girl in my life, Now you understand my strife. I’d run a mile, To see your smile, The way your skin gleams, Makes you the girl of my dreams. You’re eyes, Are as blue as the skies. They make me think, To go on the brink, Of happiness. Which can only be, That you’re with me. When I look at you, my heart steams, Which can only mean you’re the girl of my dreams. When I first saw you I realized something, That when we’re together you’re the only thing. That matters in this world, Which feels like its being twirled, On Cupid’s arrow, Your as delicate as a sparrow. Flying in the wind, Not being with you makes me feel like I’ve sinned. Every time I see you my heart screams, I think this means you’re the girl of my dreams. There is only one problem, I’ll always be lonesome. The reason for this, I’ll never feel you’re kiss. Because there is only one place I see you, And this place, is my dreams. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Any one who can write as sweetly and adoringly as this, deserves to have this dream become their reality. Hi, Hockey! Welcome aboard the Pip Ship Lollipip as I affectionately refer to our home of kindred spirits! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to PIP, Keep on dreaming, she will appear one day, just out of the blue...maybe these pages of blue? you never know? I know a hockey player, he taught me how to ice skate.... Enjoyed you sharing your heart with us~ stick around and write some more~ Hope you feel at home here~ ~ARH |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Nice first poem. I'm from the great state of hockey, so I'm feelin' ya there, playa. Welcome to pooptalk. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! Lovely first entry. Go on dreaming, she will manifest, don't doubt it. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry. Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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