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brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

0 posted 2009-09-14 10:13 PM

the lines are all
muddled

tear-smeared
illegible
this dismissal

ledges crumbled

stone-puddled
riddles
whispering

and I am brittle

stumbling
on trestle
in thistle

dwindling
bone-whittled

fumbling
I pause
and listen

for rustle
of your

pennywhistle
.

(hiatus)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-09-14 10:35 PM

Images, thoughts, and feelings tumbling down the page ~ and I was tumbling along with them.

My dear ss, the only tears that should ever fall from your beautiful brown eyes, are tears of joy.

This poem aches ~ and I felt every word. I can hear the tinny sound of the pennywhistle blowing as I was reading...

I am sending a big, warm hug your way,
Love,
Linda

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

2 posted 2009-09-14 10:50 PM

thanks lindy

it was a rough time

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-09-14 11:45 PM

Splendid writing, Shellie. Yes, it aches - but you wrote so well that I was right with you, aching.

Love,
A

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 360
New Orleans

4 posted 2009-09-15 12:08 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IbUl_E-R91Q&feature=fvw

Always a song to cheer up those in need.

Beautifully captured.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

5 posted 2009-09-15 12:27 PM

poet

thanks for this cool bobby hebb jam..never heard it before but enjoyed it very much!

thank you..who can not smile after that

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

6 posted 2009-09-15 12:41 PM

Awwww, this is so sad, Shellie. i do hope things get better for you.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-09-15 04:19 AM

Dear Shellie, you just made me open my dictionary to search for the meaning of quite a few words. They all paint a dismal picture of that particular moment in time. The flow and rhythm give the feeling of a stream that in the end carries your sadness away.

Wonderfully expressed!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2009-09-15 07:22 AM

ms browneyes..I can see a girl in woman shoes dancing here..and a woman barefoot laughing too..enjoyed it ms

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2009-09-15 03:36 PM

Beautifully penned. I love emotion filled writes!

ARCTIC WIND

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

10 posted 2009-09-16 09:41 AM

Always enjoy reading your splendid, unique style and wonderful poetry.

Very nice.
Tracey.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

11 posted 2009-09-16 10:08 AM

This has a beautiful sounding tone to it with the word choices you did and it rolls off the mind's tongue.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2009-09-16 10:13 AM

Ah, I too like emotion-filled writes and this one certainly, wonderfully qualifies.

j.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2009-09-16 01:00 PM

Shellie... this is beautiful writing.. aching but beautiful..

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

14 posted 2009-09-17 12:05 PM

             thanks so much

          for all the kind words

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