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brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

0 posted 2009-09-12 11:15 PM

she found it there along the ledge
amongst the green between the hedge
it called to her, she let it wedge
it has an edge, it has an edge..

but notes were played into her ear
erasing doubt, erasing fear
the meaning real, the message clear
she holds it dear, she holds it dear..

it tugged at her to take a leap
to find the things that she would reap
she takes the chance that she will weep
it’s hers to keep, it’s hers to keep..

.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-09-12 11:39 PM

shelli girly,

I loved this in the Workshop and I love it here. It's perfection to my eyes, imagination and mind. I am so happy that you are part of PiP.

xoxox
Alison

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-09-12 11:41 PM

brneyedgrly - read this and it has a swing to it, almost like a dance, very nice...

BC

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-09-12 11:55 PM

thanks baby-girl..

you are part of the reason I stayed

______________________

bc I think that's the meter

you are enjoying

thanks so much

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-09-13 01:55 AM

Hello, Brown-eyed Beauty!

"but notes were played into her ear
erasing doubt, erasing fear
the meaning real, the message clear
she holds it dear, she holds it dear.."

~ I love it when that happens!

"it tugged at her to take a leap"

~ Yeppers, ss! You were given the sign! Now go take that leap of faith!

btw, you did this new form VERY well!

'n (((hugs)))
Linda

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-09-13 01:59 AM

Well, hot darn (don't want to have to report myself for saying bad words)! I am glad that you did!

I love you ..
A

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2009-09-13 03:10 AM

You're good at whatever you write, Shellie.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-09-13 09:32 AM

Shellie, this is not only very well done, but it holds a great message.

Perfect, indeed.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2009-09-13 09:35 AM

Really like the echoes in this...much enjoyed...

j.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2009-09-13 09:55 AM

browneyes...sometimes I see a moment as a keepsake..a place I always come back to and find that special warmth

this is a great capture of that feeling..

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

10 posted 2009-09-13 11:17 AM

I like this Shellie. You did great.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2009-09-13 11:48 AM

Wonderful style on you, although you dress up all your
poems while making a wonderful statement.

Your ending reminds me that our memories and our dreams
are ours alone, to treasure always and forever.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

12 posted 2009-09-13 11:53 AM

hello Shellie you are so inspired, I enjoy reading you.

yann

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

13 posted 2009-09-14 12:13 PM

thanks you guys..

sometimes the workshops are hard

and sometimes they are fun

I really like this style

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

14 posted 2009-09-14 12:14 PM

saving myself...

had a note in front of me to do that

thanks again...love you guys

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

15 posted 2009-09-15 06:32 PM

"it’s hers to keep, it’s hers to keep.."

this style fit you so well, today~~

nicely done, Shellie

M

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

16 posted 2009-09-15 06:42 PM

I think you're a hit!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

17 posted 2009-09-15 07:37 PM

Great work. You will have us all singing to ourselves. Love, Joyce

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

18 posted 2009-09-15 07:39 PM

I really enjoyed your words here, Brneyedgrly.

Glad that this write was bumped up to the top.

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

19 posted 2009-09-15 10:44 PM

Shellie my lovely one how did I miss this

lovely post, a most enjoyable read. love.

Lindsay

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

20 posted 2009-09-17 12:11 PM

you have made my day everyone

thank you

thanks for that tip of your hat, deer..
I always appreciate your comments

shellie

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