Open Poetry #45 |
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of zephyr brimmed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
we were playful like the sand sometimes when it has a breeze whispering mischief and the edges are upturned like new friends just waiting to discover another other you had that place you went to be a dancer and I had that place I went to be a voyeur and it was funny when we compared addresses when we realized we were each other's lovers both wearing blindfolds up until that tomorrow and then suddenly the lights were back on and we could see dark objects that stirred us and made us want to taste them in our minds we sipped the laughter water from freckle brims and then wrote poems inside our own skins with each other's hands doing the tattooing until we were opened wounds crashing together to make the sigh sounds of our demons healing ______________ daark (do of sand) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is beyond any superlative! ![]() Love, M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..as long as it does not aquire an expletive..thanks lady!! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
until we were opened wounds crashing together to make the sigh sounds of our demons healing wow ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, I love every word, every line, every image. I am gushing, aren't I. Well, I love this poem. --- you had that place you went to be a dancer and I had that place I went to be a voyeur and it was funny when we compared addresses when we realized we were each other's lovers --- Marvelous - A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes...can you say wow with your eyes closed? thanks babe ______________ ms ali-san, I do love it when you gush, thanks little one |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Loved this one, Dark! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Brilliant! What can I say other than that? Huggs Jan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
aw....thanks amigo __________ ms jb, thanks lady!! |
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