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Alison
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0 posted 2009-09-13 02:15 PM


    

(Inspired by our Doc Moose, my friend)

© Copyright 2009 Alison - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2009-09-13 02:51 PM


Ahh, now this one I understand...wonderful!

j.

Heart2Heart
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2 posted 2009-09-13 02:52 PM


Oh yes indeed, and with the perfect picture too !  Lovely Alison
Heart2Heart

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2009-09-13 02:54 PM


just beautiful Ali-girl...

Bisous du Paris
RDB xxxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-09-13 03:08 PM


This will give Dr. Moose a reason to pause.
I saw a very similar scene up on the California/Oregon  boarder, a few years ago, and I'm jealous that I didn't write a lovely haiku like this about it.
                                  Ida

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jimmy,

I love that you were here.

xoxox
A

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H2H,

Thank you.  I really appreciate you.

A

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RDB,

Hey, I love you and thank you.

A

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Ida,

It's never too late.  Get out that picture and get to work!  Let me see the outcome, please?

xoxoxo
Alison

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6 posted 2009-09-13 10:01 PM


What a fabulous photo and haiku combo!!! Alison, each one you post is an absolute treasure!

Love it! Love you!

Linder Lou

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7 posted 2009-09-13 11:20 PM



I enjoy each one of these that you do girly..

I will have that coffee table book one day..lol

wish I saw a moose in my backyard...nope..just corn

  love you  

Shel

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8 posted 2009-09-14 09:02 AM


Delightful, dear Alison!

Love,
Margherita

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Thank you, sweet Linda. I am glad that you enjoy the world seen through my camera's eyes.

Love,
Alison

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Shellie,

I love that you love these.  I bet corn has its own beauty - there must be birds and stuff around there. Deer?  Golden light on stalks of corn (now there's a poem for you).

I love you, sweetie.

A

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Margherita,

Thank you for reading my poems and letting me know that you like them.  You mean the world to me.

Love,
Alison

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10 posted 2009-09-14 08:41 PM



girly

I am writing a poem about two birds..

one dies and the other is sad.. lol

true story  

it's not finished yet

love ya   lol

Alison
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Am I gonna cry?  I am a cry baby!

  << Just like that!  Or  Just like this! >>


brneyedgrly
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12 posted 2009-09-14 09:44 PM



it's pretty bad...here's your tissues

                

you make me notice nature..thank you

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13 posted 2009-09-14 10:41 PM



Dear Alison, what a magnificent picture of

nature at its best. I loved it, Did you take the picture yourself. Well done, love.

Lindsay

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14 posted 2009-09-14 11:29 PM


Hugs to you, Shellie.  I will be watching for it with tissues at hand.

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Lindsay,

Thank you, my friend. Yes, that is one of my pictures.  I only use my own photographs.

xoox
A

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15 posted 2009-09-15 12:43 PM


This is a beautiful picture, Alison. As well as the haiku!
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16 posted 2009-09-15 12:57 PM


Thank you, sweet one.

xoxoxo
Alison

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17 posted 2009-09-15 07:45 AM


did I tell you I have a "moose drool beer" tee shirt?  love the photos babe and that stuff you write all over em,.,(grin)
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'nuff said...

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19 posted 2009-09-15 10:33 AM


D,

No you hadn't.  Did I tell you that I have a "Poodle with a mohawk" T-shirt?  

Thanks for looking through my window.

A

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Kacy Girl,

You've been here.

Love,
A

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20 posted 2009-09-15 03:35 PM


I'm totally saving this!!!!!


ARCTIC WIND

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21 posted 2009-09-15 03:42 PM


Wow!

The comments alone say it all, so true.

Loved it!

Jan

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22 posted 2009-09-18 08:58 PM


We all have reason to pause when you post a poem
LOve
Liz

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23 posted 2009-09-18 09:39 PM


a photographer as well as a poet.  The combination is unbeatable.  Go for it.  Love, Joyce
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24 posted 2009-09-19 03:44 AM




     I love how solid and organic that moose is.  It is not an namby pampy moose.  It is a meat moose.  It's in the center of a wonderful landscape, but I think it's thinking about food and how its hooves feel in the mud.  It's a down to earth moose, and I'm cheered to make it's acquaintance.  Please say hello to it the next time you see it for me.  Offer it Moose Moss.

Sincerely, Bob Kaven

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