Open Poetry #45 |
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Should I send it to her? |
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rtsakers New Member
since 2009-09-12
Posts 1 |
Farewell Poem You have revived the dead tissue once scaled across the bottom of my heart My soul dances once more with the breath of new life You may never know the extent of your healing touch nor do I Though time will reveal the truth I curse the same time who intends to bring us distant the same time who refused to pause forever in that one moment you were mine I have no right to shed light on what may have been a fluke so trust it will be shunned from my thoughts But sometimes the mind is set aside while the hands take control Wherever my head may be the memory of brushing the back of your hand shall stay with my thumbs forever Wherever your ambitions may lead Follow them no matter how much I beg and plead I promise to leave you alone so long as you satisfy my one need Know that you are a special girl Few deserve your hand Modern thinking may discourage you of everlasting love but if love is sought with patience and morality it will open you the gates of heaven So submit yourself to nothing less then love that places you above all the rest Affirm your trust in love as you have reaffirmed my trust in hope And never stop shinning your light of joy upon the world - R. T. Sakers |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Welcome to Pip! Love this poem and the conclusion is beautiful and wise too. Yes, why not send it to her? I am sure she would love to read your words. Love, Margherita |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
To her this message you should to her send. Then your love for each other may not end. Together you may sail stormy seas, to love each other as you please. The key to lasting love I've found. Is to share a cause profound. Together to share in common fight. Against a foe of fearsome might. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
stunningly sweet.. words to be heard.. please send it to her |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
yeah. why not. "it is such a secret place--the land of tears.." (the little prince) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW..This spoke volumes to me....I had to read it a second time.... You should send it to her...Why Not? life is all about second chances and love... once you find true love, never let it go, it is so very hard to find again.... ~ARH ![]() |
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