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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps it is the winds that move the clouds when you bring your smile in easy to carry skin with your hair still wet from the dawn kiss and your eyes gentle places a man can listen to and then in my loose fitting imagination you are the lady tree without forests in high heals with chin to my shoulder a waltz of cuff links and glass like gossamer you are distant after, as if always in tomorrow but you smile with your eyes at my words and you wear them sometimes as pendant metal just for a moment away from your window sill where the length of your shadows touch my mind _______________ daark (ladytree) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I absolutely loved this, it reminded me of a picture actually I created to honor a dear friend of mine that has passed on. I have to tell you this is possibly my favorite of yours, could have many interpretations. Lovely Dark. Here is the graphic it reminded me of. and the length of her shadow still touches my mind.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms myst..I am humbled to please your thoughts...such a cool image. Thank you so much for sharing. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark.. even from Paris you manage to smile my days... merci Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b..am sure you are making the paris dudes take a second look!! Thanks lady |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Yes, many interpretations, indeed, but I see a bit of voyeurism in this one, love from afar, watching, waiting and assessing the right mmooment. Great write! Huggs Jan |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such gifts you share. Where does this kind of man hide? I just had a dream vision in which you read this poem and the audience absorbs its beauty ... you would feel the heart vibrations rise to higher rhythm. Also the conclusion is especially enticing, as it involves your mind. Love, Margherita  |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Would it be silly or shallow to say that sometimes you are just pretty? perhaps it is the winds that move the clouds when you bring your smile in easy to carry skin with your hair still wet from the dawn kiss and your eyes gentle places a man can listen to and then in my loose fitting imagination you are the lady tree without forests in high heals with chin to my shoulder a waltz of cuff links and glass like gossamer you are distant after, as if always in tomorrow but you smile with your eyes at my words and you wear them sometimes as pendant metal just for a moment away from your window sill where the length of your shadows touch my mind _______________ daark (ladytree) Rolled this around in my mouth before swallowing, H |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh D~ I really love this!! The length of your shadow has such a nice slant to it. You're too sexy for your loose fitting imagination, Meester. ....and it's way too hot in here!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jb, thanks lady friend _______________ ms mar, thank you special lady ________________ ms UBP, thank you for sipping lady!! ________________ ms bluezy, too hot? roll those windows down? no, don't roll your eyes...thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I'll just sit over with bluesy and fan myself, if you don't mind. Thank you again for turning the heat up. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, you might just step out of the parka and artic booties? thanks babe |
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