Open Poetry #45 |
in tao gown sung |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it wasn't that I wanted to be the only one that you wanted to be the only one with I only wanted to be always the last one when you were back from your exploring or visits to the crazy side of wondering and your hands were dirty from touching and when you found out everything you wanted and reapplied the formula repeatedly again to be sure it was as wonderful as you thought and then came back with your fragile exposed just needing some understanding acceptance and someone to help you finish your statement when you found yourself open and needed closing _______________ daark (eyes of tao) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your words trasude sensuous sacredness and your guidance inspires trust. Your poem is like a session of blissful BEING, which I fear not many are able to achieve. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms mar. Thank you special lady |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
her gown, wind-whipped threads caught in the branches of him now ribbons of want. Did anyone ever tell you you have a way with words? ;-) Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi, thank you babe, perhaps they just have their way with me? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
*sigh* just lovely, Mr Daark. Bisous du Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b...thanks lady friend |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well heck, that's enough to make a girl come undone! You're somethng else, DS~ and that's a good thing!! Hug~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy... thanks babe..you are something else too |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D You make a woman want to go away, just so she can return. That's pretty amazing. Thank you for sharing the parts of you that you do share when you do. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..well most of them forgot about returning..lol thanks little one |
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