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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps you were a sky, a shy woman kind that cloudless dancer dancing her passion a canvas wearing only transparent oils in need of permission from fingers to paint you were soft like swelling around a smile and then quiet after as if your eyes were there a tiptoe ballerina looking through transoms to see if you still could see your self that way my hands moved the drapes away to show you dawn and how lovely you looked glistening your ends like the residue of a well after it rains when there are not enough fingers to capture you glanced at my eyes for only moments then and smiled at my insatiability reflecting like sand colored mirrors devouring an ocean and you said you had one still hidden inside just a heart width away, waiting to be opened ___________ daark (suna-do, way of sand) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-09-2009 09:08 AM).] |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D (it's too early to type -- I typed "j" and who the heck is "j"? Dunno!) There's not much I can say after reading beautiful poetry. So, I'll just shut up and enjoy it. A PS - You know that making me shut up is a major feat in itself. Good job! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms ali-san they say the sound of a sail in light wind is like laughter..so I will take your quiet as a gentle wind. Thanks little one |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Romance and laughter what could be more inspiring? Again you captivate with your mastery. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms mar Thank you dear lady. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
a tiptoe ballerina looking through transoms love  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Browneyes, thanks for dancing by babe. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Came back to read again and it still is a favorite. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe!! |
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