Open Poetry #45 |
Elusive Knowledge |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Listen to the morning breeze part the leaves of night in dawn's cobalt sky with beams of shimmer-light, as a solitary dewdrop glistens in cosmic reflection, all-seeing, all-knowing but rarely revealing the depth of Whole. ~Elusive Knowledge~ One can almost taste a milky wave of energy pulsating rhythmically, enticing weary spirits to re-energize, re-align disjointed mindsets, to merge with the universe into a slip-stream of sublime serenity. Somewhere, a bubble suddenly bursts, releasing an evanescent wave-spirit into the great void. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Kacy, this is a most beautifully inspired work and as you may know by now, totally after my own heart. You perceive the Whole and render it masterfully. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kacy, cosmic knowledge may elusive to many Earthlings ~ but not for someone as evolved as yourself ~ or Margherita. You creative mind (and spirit) is a beautiful thing to behold! Love & Cosmic Light, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This was brilliant! ~ Wonderful write dearest Kacy. to you ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, AW! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem dear Kacy, Thanks for sharing, love. Lindsay |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Loved it. Love Esha. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I very much enjoyed this poem, Kacy. But I often wonder whether it is cosmic knowledge that one seeks, or one's place within it. As humans, existential uncertainty is part of our very existence. It's a question that can only be answered through philosophy and spirituality. Many ignorant people claim that the two are in conflict, but I see the disciplines of mind and soul as one. 'Wailing voices on the wind, urging me to turn. Distant tortured screams. Cold blue fires burn'. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
There is soooooooooooooooo much in the world, and you open our eyes to it, or if we have already experienced it, you remind us about it. You are one of Pip's greatest and most wonderful gifts. Thank you. Owl |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Everyone have already mentioned it, adding to the applause. The knowledge you poets possesses is beyond my little bird brain. Enjoyed this masterful write. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery and 'universalism' ! much applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"One can almost taste a milky wave of energy pulsating rhythmically, enticing weary spirits to re-energize, re-align disjointed mindsets, to merge with the universe into a slip-stream of sublime serenity. " You gift us with this Kacy, and then drive it home with your ending... You m'dear are a master at this and I am so danged glad to behold that mastery tonight. Gosh, I've missed your words hon. Much luv, D |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Where were you back in the sixties, seventies when I'd've sat under the milkyway and discussed this with you all night and into the day. ahh, I remember, you were that twinkly one, a little off center that I talked to and ahmmm'd with when everyone else had crashed. Yes...we had a lot to say. Loved it... j. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I was 'everywhere' Jimmy. California, then Texas (ex was at Fort Bliss in El Paso before going to Nam). Then the Middle East and Europe for a year, back to California and Oregon. We were under the same milky way the whole time |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Listen to the morning breeze part the leaves of night in dawn's cobalt sky with beams of shimmer-light, as a solitary dewdrop glistens in cosmic reflection, What a beautiful image... what a wonderful poem! *S* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"enticing weary spirits to re-energize, re-align disjointed mindsets, to merge with the universe into a slip-stream of sublime serenity." Yes, indeed, but so hard to do. Wonderful write, Kacy. Almost takes my exhaustion away. Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ruth and Helen, thank you, for reading and gifting me with these nice replies! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggies) Oh Kacy, one thing I've especially loved about your poetry in all my time here is how you really embrace the spiritual realm in life and reach for something beyond the air of your fingertips, where so much lambent imagery and grace is always found! (sigh) What I've been working on lately is merging my poetry with Conscious Dance, because I feel my latest poems are not meant to be read on paper but rather kinetically brought to life, and I've been regularly attending Ecstatic Dance and what's called the Sacred Circle Sunday Dance Gathering, which are Conscious Dance events. Many of my new friends, including my dakini and fellow volunteering friends, also attend these dances and I've gotten soooooooooo much inspiration from them, so much ethereal essence and elusive knowledge from them! This is one of my favorites from you yet, my friend, I'm keeping this one in my personal library! XOXO, Lisping Hibiscus "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, that is great! Interpreting life through body movement is a timeless and universal expression found 'round the globe. It's wonderful that you have found a way to express in bodyart what you already do so well with words! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
My favorite of many favorites of yours, Kacy. Ida |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
Okay, Midnitesun. That does it! You are my very first favourite poet on this site. Your poetry speaks to my core values and beliefs. The words compliment the imagery, and a Cosmic spirituality shines through. Thank you. Sutra 93: Do not speak to me of Reality: it is a personal concept that varies with the Observer. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for always being here for me, Ida. Hippie! What a nice comment! Welcome to Pips! There are many interesting and fine writers who grace these blue pages. Enjoy! I'll be looking for your offerings. |
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