Open Poetry #45 |
Today in Paris... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Today in Paris the sun gods are smiling I think because the Parisians appear relaxed and happy after their August vacannes You find me sitting in a small cafe off Rue Monge my view is of flowers and a very busy boulangerie there are people on balconys high above looking casually out of their secluded apartments looking casually even at me I see a man in front of me having his lunch a simple baguette and coke he looks around sees me and smiles how nice how very nice that he has taken time from his busy day to smile at a stranger Living in Paris suits me so very well Smiling at strangers suits me even better.. Bisous du Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (09-08-2009 12:15 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a dreamy time in Paris, dear Roniece. I understand it suits you well. Thank you for the lovely snapshot of the atmosphere you breathe. Bisous. Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have alreadys wanted to visit that belle ville! Roneice, you have just taken me there. I am enjoying your snapshots du Paris. They are very well done! The visuals remind me of a Rockwell painting. ~ You engage all of my senses and your poems are captivating. You sound happy and relaxed. I'm smiling with you. Bisous du Canada Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
RDB, I am always happy when you get to go home to the city you love so. I do believe it is your heart home - and someday maybe your forever home. I love seeing it through your eyes. Love, Ali |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Lovely sharing part of your morning in Paris Roniece, you smile so nicely while sharing moments we can ponder on my friend. Thanks for the insight good feelings you have given, keep enjoying your time. Rick |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Nice snapshot of the place and smiling at strangers what a wonderful thing to do.Smiling here too... "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
maybe i'll meet you there some day, siting en une petite cafe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love it when you are in Paris and share pieces with us...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My lovely girl in gay Paree, you certainly seem to be having a wonderful time over there, well that's what holidays are all about so enjoy it while you can. I hope you don't get any silly ideas about stopping there altogether for we want you back here in Aussieland. Take care and have fun, love. Lindsay |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Honestly speaking it always pleasurable to stay among strangers ,for us out here with a huge lot of rules and regulations it is a blessing.We can be our natural self ,your poem took me to situations which I really yern for.Nice poem. Love Esha [This message has been edited by ESHA SEN GUPTA (09-09-2009 06:55 AM).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How absolutely delightful! May I join you for lunch? Liz |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
the title drew me in nice one roniece |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Bonjour. You paint the scene very well and make me yearn to be there among my ancestors. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wish i were in paris with you |
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