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Murky traveler
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Murky traveler |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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Murky traveler Dashing through the shallow waters deep, There she goes, did you see that little leap? Murky brown colored traveler of the sea, No scales on her body, how could this be? A coronet on her head, long mouth to eat, Steering forward upright on a single feet, A body made of fragile bone plated rings, Stationary objects she finds, she clings. Two independent moving little eyes, Pathetic swimmers in the deep blue skies, Wandering around the meadows green, Camouflaged in grass, she’s rarely seen. Changing color during the pre dawn dance, Then you know, it’s time for romance, She will never bear her young ones ever, Males getting pregnant, nature is very clever. She visits him daily for her morning greets, Inside him now many little hearts beats, Care for her is so very essential and must, She is so unique; her care is just more than lust. @Prasad.N September 6th 2009 All rights reserved to Prasad.N "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nature in all it's beauty...what a splendid creature you write of. Really loved your ending, lust is so fleeting and the pleasure...like instant gratification, hardly worth putting in the time. Much enjoyed, Prasad~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Natural feelings are in many ways, a blessing.  ARCTIC WIND |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello prasad, you summed it up, the poetry and the murky traveler (is he hippocampus ? i am the stupid one here), however the poem is exquisite with lovely verrses and kind of symmetry in stanzas...Thanks for the enlightning poem. yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was a veeery interesting and intriguing write. ~ Read almost like a riddle. I had images of chameleons, mermaids and seahorse running through my mind! Entertaining read!  Linda |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi BluesSerenade, Thank you for taking time to read and thank you for writing such wonderful comment. So glad to read them they bought a smile. Hi ArticWind, Surely nature is all true and beautiful. Much of a blessing indeed. Thank you for your kind comment. Appreciate it.  Hi Yann, You hit the nail on the dot, Yes, he is hippocampus, my friendly seahorse. Thank you for your kind response. A unique subject to write on for sure. Knowledge is power only when it’s shared. Hi Dear Linda, Offcourse its kind of riddle, so very glad you found it interesting and intriguing. It’s brings me great pleasure to read these kind comments.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a beautiful and informative write, dear Prasad. A lovely quiz too! Hippocampus are such graceful creatures, you did them justice! Love, Margherita |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
A fascinating poem, very beautiful as well. You have a great talent!!! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very interesting post this one Prasad, you wrote it well. Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Hallo Prasad, The poem was really fasinating and till the end I kept guessing and well even then I wasnt very sure. You write very beautifully. Love Esha. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Dear Margherita, Hippocampus are one of my favorites sea creatures and I am so glad to write about them. Happy that you found this write informative. Thank you for your kind comments. Hi GBride, Thank you for your beautiful response and how kind to say such words. Hi Lindsay, So glad to read your comments, thank you for writing them. Really appreciate it. Hallo Esha, Nature is all beauty and grace, so glad these lines kept you guessing for the anwer. Thank you for your comments  Thank you once again to one and all for taking time to read my words and writing your beautiful comments. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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