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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Gone like that leaf in the green yellowing gone like the trust of her cling to the branch Done it is rust from yellow to this-- flutter-fling parchment spinning wings made of lust. I wish I'd done anything anything else than spread my blood thinly through veins of myself. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this is so sad but your writing is so wonderful  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It is a sad write, SB, but it's never too late to ... thicken the blood. I can relate so much to what you say and, as usual, you say it so well. Helen |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Awesome dont know about others but have gone through such phase.The saddness pierces right through the heart.God bless you. Love Esha |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
So gritty and so always well written. This is so you Karen. Impressed is me, as always. Your humble servant. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so impressive, it took my breath away. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sister hugs to you. (be on the lookout for an email...soon) |
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