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Palm Tree |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
And he said hello with his hands facing her around the slew of gazing people. He tossed her through the moving sky, she let her hair run as he sat with the tree beside his arm beside his rough curls, he realized what he had found. She sat right back next to him like a face to shallow water and he covered her eyes as if she was his only light. She wrapped her legs in between his lips, their toes, She knew. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Intersting write, not sure of its meaning though it has colorful visual imagery. Maybe its too early for me on a Saturday AM. LOL |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Midnite, grab some coffee  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I enjoyed this  |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Happy you did Browneyed. Take care. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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