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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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always the rebel side gets into trouble fighting bloody-knuckle to defend what I believe rooting for the underdog ‘cause victory is sweet on everyone always tell the truth even when it doesn’t suit not afraid of powers political games don’t interest and every moment living real time pulls back to me don’t know what crimes you could possibly accuse that I’m not already currently concurrently doing time for daily I pay my dues something from past generations nightly I pray for absolution and God only answers with silence rattling the bars in frustration it is then that I realize after all this time it is I who holds the keys to exoneration compensation and forgiveness and freedom feels good . |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Yes indeed, Shellie! Freedom does feel good, doesn't it? I am so glad you are back. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
hmmm,,, Seems we are both being introspective tonight. Great write, great perspective and so true |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Why do I feel like standing up and clapping. You do that to me, you know -- just drag me right into your words. It's a special thing about you. I have missed you. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I rattle a few bars too...but then they say "last call" and I am back to the dog pound..cool stuff browneyes |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Its good to be you. ~Freedom, **sigh**, what a precious gift.  to youARCTIC WIND |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks you guys I had to have a little help with this... taking most of the 'I's and 'me's out I love being back here  shel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Brown-eyed Beauty, it was great getting to know you ever better with this self expose! The more I learn ~ the more I like you!  While reading your closing lines, the theme song from the movie "Rocky" played in my head! "rattling the bars in frustration it is then that I realize after all this time it is I who holds the keys to exoneration compensation and forgiveness and freedom feels good" ~ and yes, freedom can feel VERY good! Love you! Linda  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
lol thanks lindy lou I feel like Rocky some days love ya |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This write exudes real power ... your power, dear Shellie. I believe Universe always sends answers for our highest good, but we are not always synchronized ... But you actually did find the answer ... you know you have the key to freedom. Thank you, for this reminder, you just channeled Universe's response and poured it into my heart. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
i'm really diggin this piece...its fast paced hard hitting and poignant. and it has a good message. funny how it takes us years to figure out we had the answers all along. zaac I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I enjoyed your revelation. Too often people blame other people or the cruel world for their own predicaments when it is they themselves that hold the key out of bondage. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello shelly, some kind of wise confession, of intimate message to an anonymous reader, thanks for the poem and the thoughtful words. have a nice day yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - nothing like letting go and knowing the freedom. What a rush... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
rattling the bars in frustration it is then that I realize after all this time it is I who holds the keys to exoneration compensation and forgiveness and freedom feels good Hi Shellie |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sorry Shellie, I meant to tell you not to leave those keys out of your hand ever. You be the one who calls the shots. I'm sure you are quite capable of doing that. Great post my dear. Love. Lindsay |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks everybody |
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