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Open Poetry #45

All I Know

Innse Gall
New Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 8

0 posted 2009-09-04 03:18 PM

In wind-consuming
Quiet twilight,
Standing still
We moved the world.
With time forgotten,
Staring onward,
I told her only
All I know.

And it was more than
All the others
Thought to think of,
Thought to know.
Behind the night,
Her eyes were glowing,
She moved them only
To say 'I know'.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-09-04 04:05 PM

Intriguing and beautifully written.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2009-09-04 05:11 PM

Loved the ending, the quiet calm while staring into the twinkling eyes, perfectly done.

ARCTIC WIND

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 2009-09-04 09:59 PM

A private moment beautifully expressed. Wonderful writing!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2009-09-04 10:00 PM

I'm liking this so much!
Your thoughts are refreshing and ever so romantic!!

Welcome to passions~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2009-09-06 11:16 AM

I saw this at the top and knew I had responded.
Thought I was losing my mind there for a minute.
Second time around is just as beautiful though!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2009-09-08 07:17 PM

Enjoyed...James

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