Open Poetry #45 |
A TRIBUTE TO YOU FRIEND |
ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
ATRIBUTE TO YOU FRIEND Thought I woke up with today Why O why do I live in yesterday And your tranquill face came before with a smile Me thought how could I let foolishness steal my smile When I had you holding my hand and teaching me to stride Why O why did I let my traumatic yesterday stop my stride I stopped in my tracks and stood thinking for long Is this how I repay my friend for making me strong When anger invades you take a deep breath says he Close your eyes and think about me You will find me smiling at you around the corner Why O why do I always make less your honour If friend I truely hold you dear I will keep your faith and never fear Rough maybe the path I tread through this life But with you by my side should I stop and strife With thoughts which hurt you more than me Why O why do I drag you through sorrow with me You taught me the meaning of smile And silently withstood all my rantings Never did you complain when I took away even your smile Just remained within my vision all through my ravings To love and cherish you I am honour bound Why O why do I slurry the life time friendship I found. [This message has been edited by ESHA SEN GUPTA (09-06-2009 04:54 AM).] |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Sorry friends i have made two typing mistakes one I wrote racks instead of tracks and the second I forgot to write find me smiling at you.please bear I will pay attention next time. Love Esha |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
that's what friends are for. You are lucky to have found a good friend, who stands by you at times of hardships.Wonderful tribute to a worthy friend.Keep writing.. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Thank you Prasad keep up the encouragement and I will try to live up to your expectations. Love Esha. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Esha, nice to read you, your poem is all what friends are made for, we have ups and downs and with friends we can manage it, thanks for the thoughtful poem. yann ps, you know you can correct the wrong words during a day (or two ?) you go to the icons above your poem and there is one for editing... have a nice day yann |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Thank you Yann it was very thoughtful of you to guide me. Love Esha |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
A poem we all can relate to. clever talks delay friendship! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Friends are to be treasured, indeed. Loved your message here. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A good friend standing by our side can help us get through difficult times. Esha, I believe that one must be a good friend themself, and that in turn draws people to them that will be good friends. Like attracts like. Light attracts Light. Your friend, dear Esha, is a reflection of yourself. May you learn and grow from your past lessons in life but may you release those painful experiences so that they do not impinge upon your today and your tomorrows. A touching, emotionally expressive piece of writing. Love & healing hugs, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Friends are those who help us through life's various challenges. Very well done and expressed. Loved the message. ARCTIC WIND |
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