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My summer of trigonometry
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My summer of trigonometry |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I was a chatterbox first row with braces you a back seater smoking butts on the sky a match made by circumstance you gave me a pencil i gave you some peppermints we kissed by the ocean in a seasweep of periwinkle i wasn't your type and you, not of mine but it worked for that moment making brine sweeter math by the seashore we were parallel lines. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
love this :-) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Match made it heaven for that day lol heh. I really liked this, simple and well written.  ARCTIC WIND |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - what a delightful writing... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am partial to the scenery by the seashore, what an excellet poet you are. this is such a sweet poem of days gone by.... with braces no less!! Love that visual. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I love the juxtaposition of math and love here. Excellent write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"making brine sweeter math by the seashore" ~ That's my kinda math!  "we were parallel lines." ~ and never the twain shall meet ~ except "for that moment"!   Linda |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
always a treat |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep...worked for me...really enjoyed this my friend... j. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you so much for reading me |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Love your hypoteneustical approach!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is fascinating, dear Michele! Love, Margherita |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
A moment caught in time, very nice and a pleasure to read. Heart2Heart |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks so much for stopping in |
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dickpoetry Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 89 |
ah, my sweet inky one. here you are, in all your lyrical beauty. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
why thank you kindly dear Dick |
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