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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps I was mostly only that sinful sand biblically knowing your ocean side sighing when you were the praying woman horizon when you were without your gowns of purity but were still maintaining your innocence more on a occasional basis you would say something about the sighs of the serpent and how forbidden fruit was more delicious but it made us both want more, more often and our web would be so tangled as we weaved in and out of each others precautions like the fingering of needles pricking haystacks that were only trying to hide what was unspoken _____________ daark (do of sand) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love it!!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..thanks neighbor (grin) I appreciate your reads babe. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I especially loved the ending line DS. Poignancy in sinfulness. Greatness. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
no sleeping beauty when finger prick happenstance bleeds her truth on him. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CG, thanks amigo...I appreciate your reads. _____________ ms indi, care for a saliva band-aid? thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Who would ever insist on accusing you of sinning when your "sin" inspires you to speak of love so beautifully? All the Angels up there in Heaven would defend you, if there was a hissing serpent pointing its poisonous tongue at you. But of course that would never ever happen, for you would enchant the serpent too no doubt!  Delightful. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you special lady |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
our web would be so tangled as we weaved in and out of each others precautions like the fingering of needles pricking haystacks that were only trying to hide what was unspoken Every thought I have seems inane and inadequate... consider yourself silently appreciated. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thank you babe!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I don't need that wine (which I forgot to buy, by the way) to know how much I like this. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-son, thanks little one, you will always have whine by the way |
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