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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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gentle river, reveal to me currents of feeling dancing and drifting conscious and knowing streaming and living waters of healing seasoned and shifting coursing and flowing bending and giving feel me, gentle river dip my paddle in… . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
((((Shellie)))) what a deep yearning you express with this most captivating write. I see you floating graciously upon a river of feelings which bring joy and healing. Heartsounds that echo beautifully ... Good, so good, to find you in here today. Love and hugs. Margherita   |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - you reach out from the inside with such gentle words... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
flowed so smooth and soft...gentle, just like a river, the one you write about, a river of words flowing from within your heart. Stick around, you are a flower to this garden, don't allow the weeds to choke you, I didn't, your heart and soul is more powerful it is a voice that needs to be heard.... I have had some mean emails, don't know why or who from, but I don't play childish games, so silly....no time for that, so I press on... hugs to you sister! ~ARH  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
shelli, How wonderful to see your poetry again. I miss you. You know that you are depriving me of one of my favorite PiP people? I love this poem. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I've really become a fan, Shellie. You are a truly talented writer. Ida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms brown eyes....the rivers do speak to us ...sometimes we have to jump in them to hear them..nice to see you back |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the title and sounds wonderfully relaxing... "feel me, gentle river dip my paddle in…" Reminds me of the walk I took with a friend yesterday alongside the soft flowing stream.  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Shellie, you have been sorely missed! I want to go with the flow with you down the healing waters of this fine word stream...  Lovely poem! Full of hope and promise! May you forever keep your head above troubled waters, my dear ss!  Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is so strong with such little usage of words. Beautiful, just beautiful.  ARCTIC WIND |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Shellie, you don't know how happy I am to see you back. And, with another beautiful poem. It is so good to see you. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks everyone for your support and comments glad I am back |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I have been away for a while too dear Shellie, so it's great to read your touching poem on my first day back, well done my friend, love. Lindsay |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
ooh, sensual, I like |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Fabulous, all of it!! Especially the way you dipped your paddle. That's one way to get the job done! It is always a special treat to read you, girly~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
shelly, I like this poem and your poetry, there is subtlety and you bring me always in such different words, images and emotions, this is graceful and impressive...I simply admire...Thanks for the good work. yann |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks again for all the kind words... ____________________________________ I am pleased to say that amends have been made and apologies accepted...I like to give second chances All is good and I'm happy to be here |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
what can I say ... ... SPLASH!!! : ) "You don't have to go |
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