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kmart352
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since 2009-09-03

Posts 5

0 posted 2009-09-03 11:13 PM

when the rain comes down there's nowhere else id rather be,

then in your loves cover so i can stay dry by you divinity,

but as i look for your help i find other ways that lead me to deminish me,
and for those reasons i am lost fighting out of my own calamity,
so im mad u see,
and when the rain comes back around i can no longer see,
the tears in my own eyes cause me to meet my own destiny,
to banish me, forever gone beyond infinity,
so seamingly, it must mean i cannot fix me,
my own ways too primitive to limit me,
and hold me back,
id walk a thousand sands of time to get me back, fact,
the same things i seek i so reek to lack,
as i pull back the covers to peak to see my act,
only to notice my brain is in civil war with only itself to attack,
and so i re-cover my eyes to only temporarily relax,
and prepair my mind for a barage of more attacks,
but as the rain still so violently pours down,
i still search for your comfort but all i hear is a faint sound,
as that sound draws me closer i am no sooner lost again before i am found,
the voice of the world seems to dominate the sound,
and causes me to lose sight of my goal to come back around,
with nothing left to lead me, am i death bound,
or just unfound,
lost like im in a ghost town,
even scentless to the blood hounds that are sent out to find the unfound,
de-nounced to the upitomy of insanity wear the dead are announced,
and where the evil and the good have opposite amounts,
a three to one ratio it ony takes four to have three wrong-doers pounce,
on the one good man of the four,
leaving the only living hope giving blood to the floor,
nothing less and never any more,
to exhist nevermore,
as if my name was the same as lenore,
nameless here to stay evermore,
with no bird to claim my name or tell you more,
so dont follow me as oblivion is the name of my door,
and as i walk through it i am nevermore...............

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2009-09-03 11:22 PM

Welcome to Pip!

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-09-03 11:26 PM

Even when one feels lost and alone, the rain can be a comforting companion.

Hi, kmart! Welcome to our "Family of Friends"!
Writing is a good way to clear out our emotional cupboards, so to speak.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

ESHA SEN GUPTA
Member

since 2009-09-01

Posts 108
Maharashtra,India

3 posted 2009-09-04 01:11 AM

thanks for writing such a beautiful piece.i certainly will derive strenght from your poem to go on .thanks.

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