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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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over on that sidewalk side of our busy street we would just take our time not going anywhere but more just moving in occasional directions on some afternoons you spilled your laughter and it would stain your lipstick with smiles you would cover your mouth with your hands but still I heard the sounds of you in there in those almost fragile glances of your eyes before you looked down and crossed your arms trying so hard not to be susceptible again but you did wear that same dress as before when you fell in love again that other time as if you knew I enjoyed you more in costume _____________ daark (do of sand) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Like this one~~ has an almost sweetness to it  M |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"but you did wear that same dress as before when you fell in love again that other time as if you knew I enjoyed you more in costume" dressed up with a place to go |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, you were one of the first poets in PiP that really caught my eye when I read your poetry. So maybe it's partially your fault that I hung around to keep reading. Every poem of yours that I have read has touched me in some manner. Thank you, Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms MMs. Thank you lady friend ____________ Ms Slick. My smile always waits for you to visit. Thanks babe _______ Ms ali-san, I am either really blessed to have your eyes or you are really bored. (Grin). Thanks little one |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"but still I heard the sounds of you in there in those almost fragile glances of your eyes before you looked down and crossed your arms" and this.... "on some afternoons you spilled your laughter and it would stain your lipstick with smiles" you sure got a way mister  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suesea. Thanks babe, you smile me |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Wow and wow! Sometimes I think I might be afraid to stand next to you, dark stranger. You would not be looking at me but all the while learn everything there was to know about me in oh..I dunno, maybe a split second! (lol) Isn't it true, though? How we get used to seeing people looking a certain way and when they change, even a slight part of the hair, it is disconcerting and throws us off our balance in life. Brilliant writing! Jan |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You know I always enjoy your poems! This one is a total keeper.  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms JB. I would study you for a lot more then a second. Thanks lady friend. ___________ Aw thank you so much for the reads amigo. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Nope. Slightly demented maybe, but definitely not bored! A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You would defy even a cape of invisibility with the laser sharp eyes of your mind. The beauty of this poem lies in the tender attention you reserve the subject of your inspiration. Untold poetic heights again! I am in awe. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..hmmmm demented, I love the demention process and how it converts sweet nothings into whine.. __________ ms mar, thanks so much special lady |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your paper mache unglues me your cape maes mewant to crawl under it with you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms inki. You know there is alway room for you in the knots of my noose. Thanks babe |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hmmmm, must have been her lucky dress!! Love these lines too!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ but still I heard the sounds of you in there in those almost fragile glances of your eyes before you looked down and crossed your arms ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I can just picture it!! Love what you do with the sand, DS~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy...thanks babe, you always make me smile and wanna... |
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