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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-08-30 06:22 PM


Hair of Brown-Shades of Grey

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-08-30 06:34 PM


Bill, I am always amazed how you can take the same phrases and put such a sensual twist to them~~

Your background and words made me smile as each line definitely touched my heart.


M

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
2 posted 2009-08-30 07:12 PM


Awwww Bill, you are the romantic one. This is an absolutely beautiful, romantic poem. You are so artistic in, both, picture and words.
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2009-08-30 08:18 PM


Yo Bill,

This is fine work.  I've been in the hospital, so I haven't been around much.  Low blood sodium of all things.

Bobby

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
4 posted 2009-08-30 09:13 PM


It's been far too long since I read your beautiful poetry, Bill.

I bitterly regret missing such fine penmanship.

As always, your insight into the nature of romance astounds me.

And all the roads that I've been strolling down... now I've found they all seem to be marooned. So profoundly doomed.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2009-08-31 06:52 AM


I agree with Maureen. You have created a wonderfully romantic and sensuous poem around the "hair"!

Delightful write.

Love,
Margherita

vandana
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USA
6 posted 2009-08-31 05:51 PM


nice read
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
7 posted 2009-09-01 05:05 PM


Gosh, Bill, men and women alike can appreciate the soft, sensuous beauty of your poetry. It rates very high on the 'Sigh Meter'!

Your poetry appeals to all!


Linda

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
8 posted 2009-09-03 10:55 PM


OK Bill - another one for the library.  Nicely done with very soothing words.

Ariana

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2009-09-03 10:58 PM


Really enjoyed this one! ~ Really good


ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
10 posted 2009-09-04 10:04 PM



Hi Bill, you certainly haven't lost any of your expertise as a great poet since last I

read one of your poignant poems. A delight to read my friend.

Lindsay

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2009-09-04 10:07 PM


Your inspiration is lovely and your poem...
leaves me breathless!!  

Always a pleasure, BC~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
12 posted 2009-09-05 12:11 PM


Maureen - I'm glad that I could touch you with my words. I'm in amazement with your words of the poem you wrote of the same name. To write to it is very inspiring, and brings out new thoughts. Thank you...

Oklahoma Rose - your reply reaches my thoughts with your graciousness...

Bobby - sorry to hear about the hospital stay, hope things are well with you...

Suncleaver - welcome back to my humble poetry, and I'm appreciating your reply...

Margherita - she is very a great woman, and I love writing to her words...

vandana - thank you for stopping by for a read...

Linda - sigh.... I'm loving your words, thank you...

Ariana - nice to see you and thanks once again for replying...

Artic Wind - I'm thankful for your words...

Lindsay - my friend, you having lost any of your kindness in your comments. Thank you for reading, and replying...

Bluesy - h'mmmmm, to leave you breathless inspires me even more. I'm touched by these words you wrote...

BC

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
13 posted 2009-09-05 04:40 AM


Bill, every time you post, every time I am happy, the words and photos are so well together that it bring solace and joy to the reader...This is  always delightful and emotional..
regards

yann

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
14 posted 2009-09-05 10:00 AM


Enjoyed looking through your blue eyes of wonder
jbstillwater
Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico
15 posted 2009-09-07 03:42 PM


LOvely in every way, Bill.  Kind of melted in my mouth, this one....

Happy that I stopped by to read.

Jan

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