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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 my grandson Simon at the North Sea in Belgium *** Imponderable: twilight ocean charms the mind into deep wonder *** |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Such a beautiful blending or words and image...truly magic! Love, Eric |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh, this is beautiful, Margherita. Both, the haiku and the piture. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Imponderable, what a great word. Nice 575, well done, Tracey |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Beautiful picture and a very creative ku...it's interesting, because I have a poem also entitled "Fascination"  ...thanks for sharing....peaceseaker |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Oh how they can so often be our muse, Margi...and this haiku shows that is exactly what he was for you. Great writing! Jan |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
You have caught the essence of a small boy's thoughts in this one dear Margherita, both in words and picture. Says one grandma to another Love Katriona |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita, this post is truly wonder-full! The photo of Simon with the back-drop of the North Sea at twilight hour, is specatacular!!! ~ and you captured the magic of that moment with your fascinating haiku.  Lovely beyond words!  Angelo Terrestre |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a perfect match, Margherita. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It makes me happy that you all enjoyed this picture/haiku combination, thank you from my heart. My grandson Simon, 5 years old, has a reflective soul and enjoys the beauty around him. He also is passionate about taking pictures and making videos and uses his Mom's camera quite often. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Margherita, both poem and photo are wonderful, your travel has inspired you with delicacy and sweetness...Thanks for the charming haiku. yann |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Margherita, very sweet~~ you are so enriched to be able to live in that part of the world and see so many views of it.  M |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
The form is kept at its very classic form. Lovely. The feelings put into this is amazing. Profound. clever talks delay friendship! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww, a beautiful wonder!!! And a very nice haiku, Margherita~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...One can only wonder what was going thru his innocent mind when this picture was taken. A great moment in time capture by your words and picture...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, enjoyed the photos and the words bringing them both together, good writing my friend. Rick How far I can see Is that where this place does end? One day I will know |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
So serene. I feel at peace looking at the scene. Perfect balance and a reflective view. But I would not think you would do less. Lovely is not a good enough word. latearrival |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, my dear Poet friends, you warmed my heart with your loving replies. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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jjbreunig3 Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 423Maine, USA |
A delightful haiku and accompanying photo of your grandchild; a bliss combination of beauty and joy! --Joe Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Joe, for your loving comment. Love M |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Capturing a moment in the sand of timelessness is harmonic resonance. Beautiful work Margherita. Love, Hal |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love your comment, dear Hal. Thank you! Nice to see you in here. Would love to read one of your poems! Love, Margherita  |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
How I long to be at the ocean! My lakes are beautiful but there is nothing like the sea. I loved this!! ooxx ________________________ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, Like so many people, Simon finds the sea a fascinating place. After all, it’s where we all originally came from. Love Bobby |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
loved it Lana |
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Innse Gall New Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 8 |
Margherita, I have to admit that Haiku is a form that I'm not as familiar with as I should be, but here you have combined what the eye can see and what the mind's eye can comprehend, to create a short, thoughtful, and meaningful piece of work. Many Thanks, Innse Gall |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love it, love it, love it! Liz |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
In your mind a magic moment dear Margherita and I'm so glad you shared it with us all, Thank you dear Lady. love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
In your mind a magic moment dear Margherita and I'm so glad you shared it with us all, Thank you dear Lady. love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a grandchild, ocean, sun, rainbows life is grand |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita darling friend, This is special on so many levels. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful moment. Love, Alison |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 I'm saving this one Marghertia! ARCTIC WIND |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this is precious, dear 'rita... I guess if this little guy is the reason you were away so long, I can forgive you what a timeless memory you have captured love to you dear lady Shellie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am touched by all of your heartwarming replies, my dear Poet friends. Thank you so so much! Love and hugs. Margherita Another picture of the sunset that inspired Simon and me ...  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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