Open Poetry #45 |
Between sunset and moonrise |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* * * My photo - Lake of Bracciano Between sunset and moonrise * * * At twilight hour I immerse in the crystal waters of my lake. Thousands and thousands of sparks ride the waves. Except a few dragonflies flitting around and some seagulls circling the skies, I am in perfect solitude. In between the setting sun close to the blue hills defining the horizon, and the rising moon in the east above tall pine trees, I quietly swim through an endless field of incomparable, dancing diamonds. I am the audience of the fading day and of the imminent night. With half closed eyes I see tiny strings connecting every single spark to the indigo sky lingering solemnly above. I wonder. Could this stream of light be the landing runway created by the sun for souls on a nostalgic tour to planet Earth which they once called home? I hold my breath and listen. Ecstatic whispers burst from bubbles. I follow an inner urge and softly hum along. Mystical sounds rise from this stage. In deep rapture my heart pounds. While returning reluctantly to the shore I sense the pull of a thousand loving eyes I turn around to look back once more as the sparks slowly ascend into the skies. I am the audience of the fading day and of the imminent night. * * * [This message has been edited by Margherita (08-03-2009 11:10 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dolphina, I was immersed in your visions of the fading day and the advent of imminent night... I'm in awe of Nature's beauty and your ability to do it justice through your God-given talent. You continue to amaze me with your remarkable abilities and spirit. Angelo Terrestre |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Outstanding, dearest. It's always a pleasure to be in the audience when your pen shivers and you light up the page. Love, Heather |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You write beautifully, always! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Margherita, I do not post much these days but I do read certain people. You are on my list of those I read.You are keeping good company, I promise you. Enjoyed this one very much. latearrival |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Margherita, I also am one who enjoys reading your poems. You are a fantastic writer. I love to read poems about the sun and the moon. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is lovely. The sky is so alive and the starlight so bright. Beautifully done, Margherita. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
dearest 'rita _______________________________ While returning reluctantly to the shore I sense the pull of a thousand loving eyes I turn around to look back once more as the sparks slowly ascend into the skies. I am the audience of the fading day and of the imminent night. ______________________________ I so get what you are saying here I love your clarity, lady love, shellie my mind won't rest and I don't sleep... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart, dear friends, for leaving such loving comments here. I had spent a lot of time looking for an adequate picture, but nothing satisfies me fully. Reality was just so perfect and I should have taken a few pictures myself, but they are imprinted in my mind ... on one side the sparkling water and the sun, on the other the shore with its pine trees and the rising moon. Breathtaking nature! Thank you for your appreciation. Love and hugs. Margherita PS Wow, I almost can't believe it that I succeeded in downloading one of my own pictures. That's the place and shows the sparks just the way they were dancing on the surface! This pic was taken previously, but just more or less at the same hour. [This message has been edited by Margherita (08-03-2009 07:42 PM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, This is breathtaking and so peaceful. Thank you for sharing. xoxoxo Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, you do noon moons so well..enjoyed your art here ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Alison and dear DS, for letting me know you enjoyed this. Our body and our soul need such moments to realign in harmony to All there is. Love and joy. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is just beautiful beyond words, Margherita. Masterful. Definately one of my favorites of yours and that is saying a lot. Ida |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Upon your whisper quiver verses of the night breeze dances every line resonance. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You all touch my heart with your loving replies, dear Poet friends. Thank you so much! I am off to visit my daughter and my grandsons in Belgium, so happy to see them again (Simon 5, Milo 21 months and the third in arrival for October). I will keep you Pipsters within my heart and will be back before the end of August. May you all enjoy a beautiful summertime! With love, Margherita ps: to see the picture if it disappears (server problems) click here: http://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/PrNo1CQbBgiGbPfmoN-8rA?feat=directlink "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) [This message has been edited by Margherita (08-06-2009 05:54 AM).] |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Breathtaking poesy dear lady "With half closed eyes I see tiny strings connecting every single spark to the indigo sky lingering solemnly above. I wonder. Could this stream of light be the landing runway created by the sun for souls on a nostalgic tour to planet Earth which they once called home?" I wonder if we can be sisters ? I look forward to your homecoming to PIPS dear Margherita, and give those little ones a hug from me Katriona |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - what a most beautiful writing... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Katriona and dear Bill, for your very sweet comments. My grandsons were a delight to stay and play with, dear Katriona. Thank you for the hugs. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Absolutely awesome write, and the photo... has almost as much sparkle as your words! Thank you for this beautiful poem, Margherita. It will have a place of honor in my library. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You're so very neat. This poem is exquisite. Especially the bit about the sparks.... I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for making us the audience of such a sunset, is such a beautiful write. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Kacy, you bless me! Thank you, dear Paul, for such a loving comment. Nice to see you back, dear Prasad, thank you for your most kind reply. I have opened an account on photobucket, trusting that it will be easier to add here my own pictures. Trying to share another picture of the place I am writing about here: Love and joy. Margherita |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Thousands and thousands of sparks ride the waves. Here I gave away my heart. A lovely writing. clever talks delay friendship! |
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jjbreunig3 Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 423Maine, USA |
Another wonderful piece and photo; your words lap against one's ears as the tide caresses the shore. --Joe Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Ku and dear Joe! I enjoyed your comments. Love, M |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Just beautiful, my friend. just beautiful! Sometimes it does feel as if a thousand eyes are watching and maybe they are!!!!I watched the light show this month from my deck when the shooting stars were in full regalia. Wasn't it gorgeous??? Loved the poem! Jan |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
my favorite time of day margherita |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Absolutely Wonderful!!! I am taking this one to work with me today to read on my break. What an imagination you have!!! My only complaint is I am jealous of your talent!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Exquisite poetry! ~ This is a wonderful piece of art. Absolutely wonderful, dearest Margherita. ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My dear Margherita, not only a joy to read but that must be one of your very best posts ever. Take a bow dear friend, I just loved it and you. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My dear Margherita, not only a joy to read but that must be one of your very best posts ever. Take a bow dear friend, I just loved it and you. Lindsay |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Margherita, there is a very serious problem with this poem. IT ENDED! I wanted it to go on forever. Exquisite photograph lower down too. Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine sunset lake impressionism ! [wonderful ending] ... MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' ! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Janet, dear Howard, dear GBride, dear Michael, dear Lindsay, dear Diana and dear Bruce, thank you for your most loving replies that brought joy. Just went swimming there again yesterday and must say it is a wonderful place to feel the Oneness with All there is. Here is another sunset picture I took there ... Love, Margherita |
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