Open Poetry #45 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Dawn And just before A crimson glow Begins to fill The Eastern sky A red flare Into the air A whistle blows Amid cannon fire And young men For lovers mothers And Fatherland Armed and uniformed In battle gray Get up and out Of scars in earth And go off to die . |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A human poetry often hidden by rhyme and meter free of blank reasons, enjoyed the soul in the lines, Bloodline |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... the bare, crude truth. Food for thought. M |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Even though the consequence of war is known to everyone still men go on and on. Love Esha |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
And it looks as though it will always be that way. Ida |
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