Open Poetry #45 |
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Rainy Day Dreams |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States ![]() |
Rainy Day Dreams By Paul Wilson Gone forever those days of childhood dreams watching raindrops slide down window pane Puddles beckon me come splash your cares away late summer showers invite me with their rain Grass is a vibrant green from recent rain flowers have a special fragrance and glow Everything looks cleaner and fresher today Worries melted away like winters snow Oh how I love a gentle rain tap…tap…tap a steady beat falling gently at my feet Clouds of gray flowing on summer breeze nectar from above smells so sweet Beat gently on my soul rhythm of the rain cleanse my heart and mind in your special way Counting raindrops one by one let it rain forever and a day Sitting on the park bench a gentle rain brings a smile to my face I watch as others run for cover dodging raindrops in their haste I am at peace with the world cares and worries washed away Please return tomorrow gentle rain I wish you could stay ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a poetic and beautiful homage to rain and poetry, so much savoir faire, your words are convincing and call nicely the reader, thanks for the delightful poem. yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul, your poem is incredibly soothing ~ and well-written. I have been missing your poetry ~ and you. In fact, I found this so calming ~ and cleansing ~ that I am saving it so that I can revisit it often when the need arises. Thank you, Poet Paul. ![]() ![]() Linda ![]() ![]() |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Yes there is something gently soothing with rain, as if it washes all our worries away. What a lovely poem, serene and peaceful. Much enjoyed by this reader. heart2Heart ![]() |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sitting on a park bench,feeling the light touch of rain..Lovely latearrival |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
2Islander2...So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for taking time to read and reply...Paul Linda...WOW I am really missed by someone other than the neighborhood dog. LOL Serriously it is nice to be missed, I only wish that my muse would feel the same and get a move on it. I have much more poetry to share with the world. This was written for my daughter, she loves the rain...Paul Heart2Heart...Glad you liked this. I really do feel like the rain cleanses everything and bringa a fresh start to life. Thanks again...Paul latearrival...The first few drops are the worst,but once you get wet you just open up your heart and let the rain wash away all your worries if only for a short time. Thanks for reading and your reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I love to listen to the gentle rain, falling softly on my window pane. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Gone forever those days of childhood dreams watching raindrops slide down window pane Puddles beckon me come splash your cares away late summer showers invite me with their rain ____________________________________ your gentle rainshowers are very refreshing! . |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Oklahoma Rose...I love to watch a storm at night as the lightning lights up the sky and feel the power it produces. I is a mighty creation that few people will ever understand. Thanks...Paul brneyedgrly...Thanks. Your reply is as refreshing as a gentle rain shower...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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