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Open Poetry #45

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TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

0 posted 2009-08-19 11:30 PM

rain streaked picture window
frames the Dali street lights
with neon Warhol vacancy

umbrella toting Monet figures
glide past hurriedly
under van Gogh's hidden crescent moon

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2009-08-20 01:22 AM

Cleverly done, Tina. Love it.
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-08-22 05:54 AM

beautiful - take away the photograph and it is still beautiful. I always have thought that your poetry is under-commented on. It never fails to interest me and captivate me.

xoxoxo
Alison

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-08-22 12:16 PM

Thanks Tina, this is clever and fitting to art with delicacy and beauty, you transported me while reading this...Thanks again for the poem.

yann

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

4 posted 2009-08-23 06:00 PM

Thanks all.

Ali, I do get good responses on my blog though.

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