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crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
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0 posted 2009-08-20 12:09 PM



We walk by in the hall
see each other and smile
not knowing why,
we seek the other

never talked, never spoke
but you wanted to meet me.
I wanted to meet you too.
why?

we've never met
you don't know me
but my heart melts
when I get near you.

Rileigh

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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
1 posted 2009-08-20 12:40 PM


I enjoyed this one Rileigh. I think of fate smiling on two people when I read it.

Yoin

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-08-20 12:11 PM


I can feel the butterflies! What a sweet write, CC!

This brought to mind a similar situation I had once. We never spoke in passing, but our eyes would lock. Both of us were rather shy. Finally he got up the nerve to speak to me and he asked me to go on a date with him. But alas! I was moving two hundred miles away the very next day! To this day, I can still picture his face ~ especially his eyes.


Linda

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 345

3 posted 2009-08-20 08:17 PM


Aww, that's sad. It's good you remember him though

Rileigh

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana
4 posted 2009-08-21 09:11 AM


You described this very well CC.
It brings back a flood of memories for me as well.

Emi<3Naruto =]
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since 2009-09-05
Posts 32

5 posted 2010-02-03 01:51 AM


beautiful
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