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Soul sigh shower |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Soul sigh shower * As above so below truth embraces me. Immersed in azure waters I float under a silvery sky. Raindrops fall upon my face in quiet reviving rhythm. My mind drifts into receptivity and records the mesmerizing cosmic heartbeat resounding across me into infinity. Soft waves like invisible hands caress every inch of my skin. Like tiny kisses from eternity the raindrops gently knock on the windows of my spirit. As if by teletransportation through the rising mist I reach the land of revelation. Centered and in harmony with all that surrounds me, I open my inner eyes to far away shores of light. Wrapped in ribbons of peace, I have found my way back into the ever reassuring loving womb of Universe. Living waters have plunged me into the creative space between above and below. In awe I fluctuate between parallel worlds traversing me, in my wholeness, in my spirit and my flesh. And I sigh and kiss the showering skies as if baptized anew by a host of Angels in the name of eternal Love, the one power ruling all life. As above so below truth embraces me. * |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is well thought-out, and written. It's always best to be embraced by the truth, that way you don't miss anything that's real. Love Bobby |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I read you in awe, yanno. I try to find this place that you pour your spirit from so securely, and think sometimes that if I must try so hard, it can't be a good thing. You have my total admiration.  You're a beautiful woman.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
....SAVED!!!  Oh, my dear soul sister Dolphina, tears are welling in my eyes from the sheer beauty of this divine penning. It is beyond beautiful ~ My soul is sighing.Oh, how I'd love to take a shower with you! ~ a soul shower such as this, that is!  I do so love your poetry! ~ and spirit! I will read ~ and experience ~ your mediative words, often. Thank you Maga Magherita!    Angelo Terrestre |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Centered and in harmony with all that surrounds me, I open my inner eyes to far away shores of light. Wrapped in ribbons of peace, I have found my way back into the ever reassuring loving womb of Universe. ~this is totally lulling....beautiful poem, Mar |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I tried to pick my favorite lines, but they all speak to me in a very special way. You write beautifully, Margherita~ You are indeed, centered and in harmony!!! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, You bring me serenity with every poem. You are a beautiful woman and a beautiful poet. This is just a keeper, just like Linda said. Thank you for you. Love, Alison |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Your beautifully written poem makes a deep impression in my mind. Heart2Heart |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This should be read aloud to everybody in the whole world, preferably at the start of every day. Lasting world peace would be the immediate result. Margherita, of all your magnificent poems, this is, in my humble opinion, the very, very, very best (although it is difficult to remember them all at the same time). I just simply don't know how you can ever write a more perfect poem. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for your appreciation. Your most generous comments brought heartsmiles. Enjoy a beautiful week, allowing your creativity to surface and to manifest, while growing in awareness of the beauty of being. Love, Margherita |
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freeze us both in time@ Junior Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 16 |
nice |
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freeze us both in time@ Junior Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 16 |
Dearest Margherita I am contacting you not only about the fabulous piece above but to personally thank you for being so supportive with my poetry...i am new to this site/ writing in general and your kind remarks were much appreciated I really enjoy your poems they are so expressive and extremely well developed...so kudos to you my friend! you bring all words to life so keep doing it! thank you beatifulheart peaceNlove |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear "freeze", for your most loving reply. It's good to have you aboard the Pip-ship. You write in a very beautiful, thought provoking way. Love, Margherita |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I so enjoyed your Soul sigh shower and now feel refreshed my friend, thankyou for the sharing. Rick |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Owl. This poem would be a wonderful way for everyone to start their day. Beautiful thoughts for the end of the journey as well. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Margherita, this is exquisite! Your passionate love of all life emerges from each and every line, like a brilliant butterfly emerging from a cocoon. You take my breath away with such ethereal poetry. A wonderful addition to my growing library. |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
My dear Margherta; You are an insparation to all who have the privilege of reading your work. and I see by your picture that you have a lovely smile, and spirit comes across in your work. love to you Billie C. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely exquisite Margherita. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Margherita, the inner music in this poem is well-executed, with its richness in assonances. A delightful read. Mark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Living waters have plunged me into the creative space between above and below. In awe I fluctuate between parallel worlds traversing me, in my wholeness, in my spirit and my flesh. such beautiful writing my friend...lovely and well done.... good to see you and read you again... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is almost like a dissertation you would read because you were looking to quote an expert on the subject at hand...love how you open & close it...lends further credence to the truths that lie within...this is a rare gem...thank you for sharing... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, my dear Poet friends, you really brought joy with your wonderful replies. A big hug for each of you, with love. Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, lovely whet images in this slice of swallowing.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - what can I say that hasn't been said, great write... BC |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Margherita What can I say that Bill didn't say, except maybe, This is the best poem I have read of yours and absolutely, one of the best in PIP. Take a bow to the much deserved standing ovation. Wonderfully done. Tracey. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Your gorgeous meditations keep me centered in vibrating beauty. Heather |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Margherita, I have been meaning to e-mail you but I seem to have acidentally erased you address. I am feeling a bit better. I was in the hospital twice in the last couple of weeks and had some minor surgery that I am hoping took care of the problem. Thank you so much for your concern. It means a lot from someone like you. Love, Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita, I've read this at the beginning of my day and know the timing was perfect just like your poem - perfect, absolutely perfect! Love Helen |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Such a beautiful refreshing soul shower your words expressed Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, thank you to each of you. It makes me happy that you enjoyed my words and told me so with such kind and generous comments. I will cherish them. Dear Ida, I sent you an e-mail. Wishing you a speedy recovery! Love, Margherita |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
Lovely poem Margherita. You have been an inspiration to me. You are always so sweet and encouraging. The world would do well to have more people like you. Lots of love Rick Rick A. Delmonico |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Rick, for your kind words on my behalf and for appreciating my "soul sighs ...". It does happen often here that we inspire each other and that is a true gift. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And I sigh and kiss the showering skies as if baptized anew by a host of Angels in the name of eternal Love, the one power ruling all life. Dear Margherita, how did I ever miss this masterpiece you have written here. You have really excelled yourself with this one dear lady. Have a great day and God bless. Love. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And I sigh and kiss the showering skies as if baptized anew by a host of Angels in the name of eternal Love, the one power ruling all life. Dear Margherita, how did I ever miss this masterpiece you have written here. You have really excelled yourself with this one dear lady. Have a great day and God bless. Love. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And I sigh and kiss the showering skies as if baptized anew by a host of Angels in the name of eternal Love, the one power ruling all life. Dear Margherita, how did I ever miss this masterpiece you have written here. You have really excelled yourself with this one dear lady. Have a great day and God bless. Love. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Lindsay, for your most loving reply; I can say that you showered me with your appreciation and I enjoyed it. Love and joy. Margherita |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
This was wonderful. I do so love the rain. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Me too, dear Clang, me too. Thank you for your loving comment. Love, Margherita |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Ditto to all the other comments! You rock! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Nancy, for unearthing this one and for your kind appreciation. Just enjoyed the memory ... Love, Margherita |
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dollmaker Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 155mass dorchester |
very dreamy and lovely......... nice job...kerri |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Kerry, for telling me you enjoyed this. Love, Margherita |
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