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Open Poetry #45
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crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
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0 posted 2009-08-11 08:40 PM

My attempt at a limerick, feel free to criticize

Once lived a beetle named Bob,
Who wished to become a frog.
Got his wish one day,
and went out to play,
but then got squashed by a log.

Rileigh

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Emi<3Naruto =]
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1 posted 2010-02-03 01:49 AM

hahahahaha i love it!
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