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morpheme of butterfly |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were always innocent enough in your eyes like the lipstick on a casual sinner when she smiles and says she never did before but has thought about it so many times when she was dreaming and then it would wake her your hands were a gentle woman kind of cautious the tip toe fingering of music you pretended as if your worshiping of the lingam limb was something you always dressed in white silk for but never put on the cumber sash consideration lest it become another inhibition that scared you and left blushing on your neck skin there like those kiss prints on occasional afternoons when you were unable to run swiftly enough to escape the cocoon of your womanly wanting when you said you didn't, but would if I made you _____________ daark (sighs of wax) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your restraints of temptation leave marks on my inner sighs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki.. tattoos are lovely when made by accident? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when she smiles and says she never did before but has thought about it so many times when she was dreaming and then it would wake her ~*~ Your smile is so very quiet... but of course, it speaks most times from your caressing poetry. This one is another one that likes me tomorrow...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...always tomorrow and yesterday will be jealous of today..thanks lady friend |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think your words are even more beautiful when they blend with wax. And beautiful they are. ali-san |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
LOVE the title and theme. Probably one if not my fave of yours to date. For everything there is a season, in it's own time and beauty. Great read and write ~Brad |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Inkedgoddess said it, echoes my mind this morning. A truly exquisite poem. Heart2Heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..thank you lady friend ____________ martiniat8, thanks Brad, I appreciate your reads ______________ heart2heart, humble thanks to you for your read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
your hands were a gentle woman kind of cautious the tip toe fingering of music There are times I feel illiterate... unable to place words on a page that express my thoughts... I'm there now reading this, so must simply say... perfection. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..your eyes are wise women on my words and your thoughts are well versed..your smile is a dictionary of sinsay-tions...thanks lady!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dark, not often am I left speechless but your poetic caress here has had that effect on me....and I can only but whisper... lovely |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks donna..you smile me |
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