Open Poetry #45 |
Like a pearl |
rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
I thought and worried all last night And I...I thought of giving up the fight And I...thought I had a friend in you And I...I guess I didn't have a clue I couldn't hurt you for the world You know my feelings run so deep like a pearl Taken from the bottom of the sea To be discovered by just you and me I didn't want to wonder anymore And I...didn't even know who was keeping score And I...I thought of running from you And I...I find that you're running too Could you ever hurt me little girl And don't you're feelings run so deep like a pearl Taken from the bottom of the sea Something to be shared by just you and me A worthy legacy is the irrevocable consequence of dreaming. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I liked this a lot, rick . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
This is a song that I recorded in 1985 or 86. You can hear it at: http://www.myspace.com/delmonico2 It is song #2. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I knew it! when I read it, it was sounding as if it were a song, and then at the bottom you tell us it was... great song! ~ARH |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aha! As I was reading along, I felt like they were lyrics to a song and I thought how nice it would be to hear you singing it! Then, I read in one of the replies that you wrote, that it was indeed, a song! I clicked on the link you provided and I got to listen to the song! Sounds great! I also listened to some of your other fine pieces! In the little spiel about yourself, I discovered that your "training as a sound engineer was from TREBAS Institute in Hollywood CA where I graduated 2nd in my class in 1987" ~ Impressive! And by the sound quality of your music, your expertise is quite apparent! Linda |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
Thank you. You are all very sweet. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Nice! I play the trumpet; I look up to and admire your musical abilities. Rileigh |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
A really nice poem with lovely couplet rhymings, enjoyed this one very much. heart2Heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sounds great ... touching lyrics, dear Rick. Love, Margherita |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
The dilemma comes right through. Love Esha |
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