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Lorenn Junior Member
since 2009-09-23
Posts 15Ottawa Ontario |
You don't see me You don't know me You are not even with me.... Where you ever? Was I ever with you? You see the ghosts of your lovers past Superimposed on my face Though my eyes cry out It's me..... Please look..... Please look you cry out But I can't hear you For the voices of my lovers past Yet we cling to each other As we cling to our ghosts Do we choose to see the one we love.... Do we remain haunted and lost In the familiar comfort of our loneliness and pain.... Everything that irritates us about others can lead us to an understanding of ourselves. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very captivating write. No doubt this is a situation all too familiar for many ... Much appreciated! Love, M |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
ah yes, brilliantly told.... nicely done! makes me want to rent that movie..Ghost of girlfriends past.... ~arh |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have haunted ~ and I have been haunted, thusly.  It's important for both to be "In the now."  Enjoyed reading your thoughts on this fairly common scenario. If we don't let go of the past, it will continue to haunt us and impinge on the present.  EA |
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Lorenn Junior Member
since 2009-09-23
Posts 15Ottawa Ontario |
Thank you  A friend of mine wrote a great book and has a wonderful line in it: "everyone one has a wound or two" Martin Rovers I've found that it's a choice that takes practice and discipline to live in the moment but well worth it. Lorenn Everything that irritates us about others can lead us to an understanding of ourselves. |
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