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crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
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0 posted 2009-08-01 12:39 PM


This explains my St. Baldrick's Day experience.  I guess it could apply to other stuff too, I don't know

On a day that was so sunny,
I looked around to get some money,
They asked "what for," I said "because,"
Who wouldn't want to join a cause.

I'm talking all my hair away,
To help sick kids to find a way.
These kids have none to call their own,
The hospital's their only home.

I shaved my head I did it then,
I got to feel just like them.
People staring in the hall,
Made me feel like I'm so small.

What else to say, but comes a day,
To keep those beastly thoughts away.
It seems the best way for us all,
To let it go with head held tall.

Please, please, please let me know what you think.

© Copyright 2009 Riley - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
1 posted 2009-08-08 08:39 PM


This just needs a bump.

It should be read, not for the rhyme but for the awareness of the topic.


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-08-08 08:50 PM


Hold that bald head up tall and proud. You did something wonderful to help those less fortunate than yourself. On an Oprah show, I saw the delight of children who received wigs made from hair donors. You have done something to light up the life of a child in need.

You are walking your talk! God bless you! People like you are making a difference.

A very touching poem with a meaningful message.


EA

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2009-08-08 08:58 PM


Yo Crosscountry83,

This is a very good idea.  

I have always had a very high forehead, and people have called me "Baldy" since I was a kid.  Now my hair is white, so no one knows the difference.

Bobby

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 345

4 posted 2009-08-08 11:08 PM


Thanks for all the replies, I still have short hair, so people think I'm a guy sometimes... It doesn't really bother me though

Rileigh

Emi<3Naruto =]
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since 2009-09-05
Posts 32

5 posted 2010-02-03 01:47 AM


aww this amazing!
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