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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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raindrops raindrops race each other down the window. tears, down my face. memories like crashed cars on a icy road, pile up in my head. love, nothing but bitter in my mouth. time stares back at me like a bare, bug stained light bulb. seasons change themselves but nothing else, or anyone else. raindrops flow like lonely tears down my window. Yoin |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
memories like crashed cars on a icy road, pile up in my head. love, nothing but bitter in my mouth. ___________________________ I love your descriptions! and anything written about raindrops  very good berney . |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Yoinn, the atmosphere of the poem is stupendous, the description of emotions is vivid and call deeply the reader, you are so well inspired..keep on the good work. have a nice day yann |
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amk377 Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58South Carolina |
Wow...this is very deep and touches to the core! Your emotions jump off the page...bleed off even. Excellent!!! "we have but a moment...only one moment" |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks Berney, We had quite a rain here in michigan over the weekend...those drops on the window stirred my pen awake. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks Yann With all the nice people who respond to my poems I will keep writing for sure. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks amk Nice to meet you and glad you liked this one. Yoin |
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