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Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-08-08 08:57 PM

Please see me

As these slices portray.
These poetic bits
Of my whole
They are, I’m afraid
The best of me,
What I could have been
If the world
Hadn’t roughed me up.

Please hear me

And the truth I speak
For I have wrongs to right
And stories to tell.
Time I’m afraid
Is rubbing me hard.

Please remember me.

For the clarity of my words,
The hardness of my edges.
People I’m afraid
Will miss the hidden
Love for you all
That rests softly in my heart.

Yoin.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-08-08 09:03 PM

Yo Yoinn,

Of course you will be remembered, as will all of us on Pip. Time is rubbing us all hard.

Bobby

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-08-08 09:29 PM

thank you Bob,
for those kind words.

Yoin

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

3 posted 2009-08-09 01:04 AM

Cant wait to hear more of these stories, and yes I will remember you

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-08-09 04:27 AM

Yo Yoin, your poet's voice speak loud and with delicate accuracy on the site...enjoy very much your talented poems...

best wishes

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2009-08-09 05:59 AM

I never forget a talented poet, Yoinn.
Ida

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

6 posted 2009-08-09 08:19 AM

Thank you martini,

as long as I have the muse I will always write.

Yoin

Larry Silverstein bought the Twin Towers 5 mths before 911 bombing. He already owned bld 11. He took out "terrorist" ins on them. He won 500 million.

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

7 posted 2009-08-09 08:24 AM

Thank you Yann,

Those are good words to hear, I appreciate them very much my friend.

Yoin

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

8 posted 2009-08-09 08:25 AM

thanks Ida, I will never forget either.

Yoin

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2009-08-09 08:41 AM

I see you! I hear you! ~ and I'll always remember you and your poetry!

~ and I want to continue to see, hear, and read your poetry!

Linda

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2009-08-09 04:29 PM

This is one of those poems that I kind of wish I had written. I'll remember you and today - I'll think of you and smile. Roughed up or not, you are among my favorites.

Alison

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

11 posted 2009-08-09 10:12 PM

Thank you Linda,

Your the best.

Yoin

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

12 posted 2009-08-09 10:13 PM

Thank you Alison

Your words touch me.

Yoin

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

13 posted 2009-08-10 09:23 PM

so tender...

will always remember you

berney

.

flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted

~ L. Hall

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

14 posted 2009-08-11 07:53 PM

Thank you Berney.

that warms this ole heart.

Yoin

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