Open Poetry #45 |
The Thief |
Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
The thief stole through the house under cover of darkness As if propelled by some singular purpose Determined look in his eye, his purpose bound Searching with his senses as some hunting hound The master, awakened from fitful sleep Of dreams of riches to fill his greed A man of glutton and unsurpassable wealth He made his way down the stairs by stealth Thief! Thief! His possessions cried out in fear As the master, with shaking limbs came near A knife in hand, malice in his heart Searching for all his bulging eyes could report When all at once from behind he is surprised Subdued somehow right before his pleading eyes ‘Name any treasure thy heart desires, for my life, I ransom all before Hell’s fires. Take for thyself whatever fancies thee, if that you would spare my life, and a coin or three.’ And the thief, long did gaze steadfast Until an eternity it seemed had passed Low and measured breath he did intake And upon his knee, his sword did he break With reproachful voice to heighten his features He began to address the weak and weary creature ‘You name not that which should be treasured above, all things of earthly sum, that which others call love. She rests in peaceful sleep though your thoughts do not turn to her in fear of life, nay, for only gold does your heart burn. Fear not, thy master of mortal riches, I shall let you live. For she is something I could not take, nor could you give.’ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Im not educated in the mechanics of poetry but I have a sense of what works. This works well and I enjoyed the conclusion. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOVE it!! this is one I haven't read before |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A brutal of riches is this poem... thought/love...over matter/possessions... always a wonderful story. Always a wonderful read. |
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