Open Poetry #45 |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Why would anyone want to write a poem? What is writing anyway? Crude self thought? And that picky meter stuff, all for naught. Do people really talk like that? Ah hum, Upon the lilt of dawn I see a page And if I put some words there on the lines I’ll soon enough seek rhymes with wild designs But still for all that ink it’s just a cage! You see? Mere words can not give meaning to This mark of pen or type. So what’s the use? No matter, more employs the soul, set loose Beyond spirit’s mortal grasp, free pursue, Our heart’s honest candour, jealous desire, To catch another’s eye and share the fire! |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Beautifully captured. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Sounds like you are upset? I for one, would like to learn that meter and get it right everytime. But, as it is, I am lucky to get it right, one time. LOL! |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think we do talk with some form of meter - maybe it's white space. But, I think there is a conversational flow. When people write free style poetry, I think that that white space is often overlooked. Interesting poem. I don't think we talk in meter, but there is beauty in the flow. That's what I think anyway. I still love free style though too. Thanks for posting this - I am wandering off thinking about it and maybe that is one thing that poetry is all about. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Captivating thoughts, well rendered, dear Bloodline. I think whether in rhymes or free verse poetry is the heart's instrument and diffuses tunes, sometimes happy, sometimes sad. And in sharing there is joy, no doubt. Love, Margherita |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Yes, I sometimes wonder about the same and if it's worth the bother. ![]() Katriona ![]() |
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