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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2009-08-05 08:41 AM



It seems love words are easy to say,
We cherish their meaning so,
And long to hear a lover declare,
“I love you more than you know”,

Often love words get turned around,
And are naught of which we adore,
Spoken in anger, with malice and spite,
Like; “I don’t love you any more”,

True love is such a precious thing,
Deeper feelings, than anything we’ve known,
But the joy we feel when we are in love,
Is contrary when a heart turns to stone,

I know this joy of everlasting love,
I’ve known the pain of losing,
When your heart is joined in profound affection,
That’s when life is most rewarding,

So, I’ll speak these endearing love words,
And romance you day and night,
I’ll hold you tenderly in my embrace,
While loving you, with all my might.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

© Copyright 2009 Wm. Tracey Bakelar - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-08-05 12:25 PM


A beautiful love poem, Tracey!
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2 posted 2009-08-05 07:24 PM


Thanks Sue.  I just thought I would pop in here.  Don't get much time to wax poetic lately.

take care.
Tracey.

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3 posted 2009-08-05 10:33 PM


"So, I’ll speak these endearing love words,
And romance you day and night,
I’ll hold you tenderly in my embrace,
While loving you, with all my might. "

~ Words and actiions that rate high on the Sigh Metre!


Linda

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4 posted 2009-08-06 02:33 AM


You better keep popping in here, Tracey.  This is wonderful and I have missed you.

Alison

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5 posted 2009-08-06 07:11 AM


Linda,  thank you for your kind comments,
I really appreciate your thoughts.

Love always,
Tracey.

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6 posted 2009-08-06 07:14 AM


Alison,   I do what I can when I can, and Lie about the rest.  
I enjoy the very limited time here, but you know how summer is, everybody wants a piece of your time.

Nice seeing you seeing me.
Love ya,
Tracey.

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7 posted 2009-10-09 12:18 PM


So, I’ll speak these endearing love words,
And romance you day and night,
I’ll hold you tenderly in my embrace,
While loving you, with all my might.


At one time I had all this and more till he decided he wante another in our bed this was a truthful and beautiful poem I think Hugg's Melissia Ann

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8 posted 2009-10-12 10:45 AM


When your heart is joined in profound affection,
That’s when life is most rewarding,

Truer words were never spoken. *S* And the promise of the last stanza is all anyone could ever hope for. *S* This is so beautiful!!

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